Assistant: Hej! Jag kan kan bistå med att bedöma, ta fram matriser och genomföra plagiatkontroller.
Uppge först aktuellt stadie och ämne.
User: Hi, I am a teacher for Engelska nivå 1 (GY25) and my students have written blog posts about a city from an English-speaking country. I would like for you to grade and give feedback for the texts that I will send to you. Here are the instructions the students followed: Travel Blog Assignment
Now that you have presented your city, imagine you have actually traveled there! You will write a travel blog entry (at least 200 words) where you describe what it was like to visit. Write in a personal, interesting way — as if you are telling readers about your own trip.
What to include in your blog entry:
1. Introduction
Begin by telling readers why you chose to travel to this city.
Mention where the city is located.
Give your first impressions when you arrived.
2. Main Body
Describe your experiences in the city using the points from your presentation:
Food: What local dish did you try? How did it taste? Where did you eat it?
Landmark/museum: Describe your visit to a landmark, museum, or historical site. What did it look like? What did you learn?
Fun activity: What was something exciting you did? Was it cultural, outdoors, or just for fun?
Tip: Use “I” and describe your senses — what you saw, heard, tasted, smelled, or felt. This will make your blog post sound real.
3. Conclusion
Summarize what you loved most about your trip.
Repeat your strongest reason why others should visit.
End with a final sentence that encourages readers to book a trip to the city.
Writing Guidelines
Write in the first person (“I went,” “I saw,” “I tried”).
Describe using your five senses and make it sound like a real travel experience.
Organize your work in paragraphs (at least 3).
Minimum: 200 words.
Assistant: God morgon! Tack för att du delar instruktionerna för elevuppgiften i Engelska nivå 1 (GY25). Skicka gärna elevtexterna (blogginläggen) så börjar jag bedöma dem enligt relevanta betygskriterier och ger konkret, utvecklande feedback. Jag anpassar bedömningen efter nivån och uppgiftens krav.
Vill du att jag graderar och bedömer varje inlägg individuellt och ger formativ feedback, eller önskar du även en samlad bedömningsmatris att använda som stöd vid rättning?
User: Please follow this format: Valdemar Fridolf
Assessment of Travel Blog Essay: Singapore
Grade Level: Gymnasiet (Upper secondary, Gy25)
Subject: English (personal descriptive writing)
Theme: Travel blog about Singapore
Length: Approx. 280 words
Summary
This travel blog shares a recent trip to Singapore, focusing on fun activities such as visiting
the science museum with simulators and VR headsets, tasting local food including curry puff,
and enjoying the light display at Gardens by the Bay. The writer highlights the city-island’s
size, location, and friendly people, concluding with a strong recommendation to visit.
Strengths and Weaknesses
Strengths Weaknesses
– Clear personal voice with engaging
descriptions of activities and food.
– Several spelling mistakes (e.g., sience,
cusine, flught, och, exlusive).
– Good coverage of notable
attractions and sensory details.
– Grammar and punctuation errors make
some sentences unclear.
– Positive tone highlighting enjoyable
experiences and helpful locals.
– Some sentences are short and could be
expanded or combined for better flow.
– Effective concluding
recommendation.
– Occasional repetition and simple
phrasing reduce variety.
Formative Feedback to the Writer
● Your enthusiasm and descriptions make the blog inviting; keep sharing
personal reflections.
● Use proofreading tools to help reduce spelling and grammar mistakes for a
more polished text.
● Expand sentence length and vary structure to enhance rhythm and detail.
● Continue including sensory details and observations to enrich content.
● Ensure punctuation correctly separates sentences and clarifies meaning.
● Your conclusion strongly motivates readers; keep writing strong endings.
Final Grade: D
Your blog is lively and personal; working on spelling and sentence flow will help improve
your grade.
Assistant: Tack för tydlig och bra formatmall! När du skickar elevtexterna följer jag den strukturen för bedömning: personnamn, bedömningstitel, årskurs och ämne, tematisering, ungefärlig längd, sammanfattning, styrkor och svagheter i tabell, formativ feedback i punktlista samt slutbetyg med motivering.
Skicka gärna första elevtexten så sätter jag igång med bedömningen!
User: Alice Mac-Donald 2025-10-17
Prov: Travel Blog HH25
Antal ord: 365
Skrivtid: 24 minuter
My trip to Savannah
I choose to travel to Savannah because I think it´s looks great there and I have never been there. The city is located in Chatam County, in Georgia, in United States.
My first impressin of Savannah was when I arrived at the hotel, it was a big hotel and they´ve had so good breakfast, lunch and dinner. I love to try new dishes so of course I tried some new dishes. I tried fried green tomatoes, my first impression when I saw them was not so good, because they looked disgusting but when I tried them it was so good. I ate it at a restaurant near my hotel, so if I want to eat more of those, I don’t nead to take for example a bus to come to the restaurant. I also tried peach ice cream. I had eat peach ice cream before but I wanted to try Savannah´s peach ice cream because the first time I ate peach ice cream, I didn’t like it, so maybe the peach ice cream in Savannah taste good and of course my mind was right, it was so good. And the best of it all, you can find the ice cream at the same restaurant as the fried green tomatoes.
On my 5th day of my travel week, I visit the American Prohibition Museum. The museum looked so good, and I was impressed of the thing that I learned about key figures because I think it´s difficult to understand history. The museum also used interactive exhibits.
On my 8th day of my travel week, I visit the Forsyth Park because I think it´s very funny to look around at parks. It was so beautiful at the Forsyth Park, and the best of it all was that my hotel was nearby the Forsyth Park.
The thing I loved most of my trip was the food, I really was suprised how good it tasted. I think other people should visit Savannah because of the food, the museum and the park. So if you like history, try new food and beautiful parks you should really book a trip to Savannah!
Assistant: # Alice Mac-Donald
Assessment of Travel Blog Essay: Savannah
Grade Level: Gymnasiet (Upper secondary, Gy25)
Subject: English (personal descriptive writing)
Theme: Travel blog about Savannah
Length: Approx. 365 words
## Summary
This travel blog recounts a personal travel experience to Savannah, Georgia. The writer describes first impressions of the city, including the hotel and local food like fried green tomatoes and peach ice cream. The text also covers visits to the American Prohibition Museum and Forsyth Park, highlighting interactive exhibits and beautiful surroundings. The conclusion emphasizes the delicious food, interesting museum, and lovely parks as reasons to visit Savannah.
## Strengths and Weaknesses
| Strengths | Weaknesses |
|—————————————————————–|—————————————————————–|
| Clear personal voice and engagement with the travel experience | Several spelling mistakes (e.g., *Chatam*, *impressin*, *nead*) |
| Good sensory descriptions around food and locations | Grammar and punctuation errors affect clarity |
| Detailed descriptions of specific landmarks and activities | Some repetitive phrasing and sentence structure could improve |
| Logical structure with clear introduction, body, and conclusion | Occasional awkward or incorrect word choices |
## Formative Feedback to the Writer
– Your personal descriptions of food and places bring your travel experience to life; keep using sensory details like taste and sight.
– Review and practice spelling and punctuation, especially apostrophe use and common city or place names, to enhance readability.
– Work on sentence variety and combining shorter sentences to improve flow and rhythm in your writing.
– Be careful with verb tenses and subject-verb agreement (e.g., *I visit* should be *I visited*).
– Try to avoid repetition of phrases like *the best of it all*; use synonyms or restructure sentences for variety.
– Pay attention to prepositions and small function words for clearer English (e.g., *located in Chatham County*).
– Your conclusion effectively motivates readers to visit—continue writing impactful endings.
– Expand your vocabulary to replace simple phrases with more descriptive alternatives where possible.
## Final Grade: D
Your travel blog has a warm and engaging tone, showing a good effort to describe your experiences using sensory details. However, spelling and grammar errors, along with some awkward phrasing and sentence structure, limit the clarity and flow of the text. Focusing on these areas can help you improve to a higher grade.
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User: Alicia Bernehjält 2025-10-17
Prov: Travel Blog HH25
Antal ord: 515
Skrivtid: 32 minuter
I chose to travel to Sydney since it has the most beautiful beaches and amazing views honestly everywhere you go. It gives you that city feeling while still having amazig wheater and that Australian vibe. Sydney is located on Australia’s southeastern coast, which gives it the most beautiful landscape and shocking views. My first impression when I arrived is how friendly everyone is, you can ask almost anyone anything and they will help you with the biggest smile on their face. I asked for dierections to the famous Bondi Beach as I wanted to cool off after my long flight and I just asked a random guy on the street with zero problems. The smell of the beach is just so calming I could almost fall asleep, the smell combined with the sound of the waves hitting the sand it’ss so incredibly relaxing. I think I even manadged to take a tiny little nap.
It’s a big city and I was honestly surprised how big it actually were, I thought it would give off the big city vibe but not be as massive as it actually was. The city is home to 5.3 million people and the streets are almost impossible to drive on once everyone finishes work.
After my little visit att Bondi Beach I went to eat some dinner at a local resturant to try some local cusine. I tried a meat pie wich I actually really enjoyed! It was amazing, a thin pie crust on the outside filled with almost like a beef stew and it didn’t sound like much but honestly one of my biggest recomendations. The following day I decided to go to the Opera House and more exact on a tour around the inside of it. It was amazing looking through the beautiful interrior and getting to know why they’ve built it the way they have. And I learned a fun fact about the roof, did you know that the tiles on the roof off the Opera House actually were made in Sweden? I know me neither! They were actually made in a factory located in Ekeby, Skåne.
After my tour I went back to Bondi Beach to relax and actually try something of my bucket list, surfing. You can take beginner lessons and learn to surf at the beach, altough it was tricky in the begining it was really fun once I got the hang off it. I think you just need to get used to the board and find a little bit off balance and as soon as you got that it’s really fun!
The thing about my trip I loved the most was the friendly people, everyone were incredibly kind and you can have a conversation with anyone anywhere they’re always up for a little chit chat and never complains on company.
You should book your trip to Sydney today so you can try the most amazing food, look at the most beautiful views and take the most relaxing nap on the beautiful Bondi Beach. Book you trip to the best city in Austalia today!
Assistant: # Alicia Bernehjält
Assessment of Travel Blog Essay: Sydney
Grade Level: Gymnasiet (Upper secondary, Gy25)
Subject: English (personal descriptive writing)
Theme: Travel blog about Sydney
Length: Approx. 515 words
## Summary
This travel blog describes a visit to Sydney, Australia, with emphasis on the city’s beaches, friendly locals, and iconic landmarks such as Bondi Beach and the Opera House. The writer shares sensory details about the calming beach atmosphere and recounts trying local food like meat pie. The blog includes a surfing experience and concludes with a warm recommendation to book a trip to Sydney, highlighting food, views, and social interactions.
## Strengths and Weaknesses
| Strengths | Weaknesses |
|—————————————————————-|——————————————————————|
| Strong personal voice and engaging storytelling | Several spelling mistakes (e.g., *amazig*, *cusine*, *att*, *wich*) |
| Effective sensory descriptions of sights, sounds, and smells | Some grammar errors (e.g., subject-verb agreement, articles) |
| Good range of detailed experiences, including local food and activities | Sentence length and structure could be more varied to improve flow |
| Clear logical structure with introduction, main body, and conclusion | Repetition of phrases like *really fun* and some awkward phrasing |
| Interesting cultural fact about the Opera House’s roof tiles | Occasional missing commas affecting sentence clarity |
## Formative Feedback to the Writer
– Your vivid personal descriptions make it easy to imagine your experiences; keep using sensory details and personal reflections.
– Review spelling carefully, especially common words and place names, to enhance professionalism.
– Pay attention to grammar, especially verb forms and article use (e.g., *a local restaurant*).
– Try combining short sentences and varying sentence length to improve flow and rhythm in your writing.
– Avoid repetition of phrases like *really fun* by using synonyms or rephrasing.
– More punctuation, especially commas, can help clarify meaning and improve readability.
– Your conclusion successfully invites readers to visit Sydney; continue writing strong, motivating endings.
– Expanding vocabulary and adding more descriptive adjectives can further enrich the text.
## Final Grade: C
Your blog is engaging with rich sensory details and a clear personal voice. Grammar and spelling errors, as well as occasional awkward phrasing, slightly reduce the clarity, but overall the text meets the assignment’s criteria well. Focusing on language accuracy and sentence variety will help you improve your grade further.
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User: ellen tenghagen 2025-10-17
Prov: Travel Blog HH25
Antal ord: 300
Skrivtid: 37 minuter
Whashington D.C
I chose to travle there because I taught that it sound good when I heard the presentation about Whasington D.C. Washington D.C is located in the mid-atlantic region of Maryland and Virginia in the united state.When I first came there I was suprised how beutyfull it was! And something I noticed whas that it wasn’t much dirt and stuff on the streats it was very clean. I become hungry when I got there so i went to try the half smoked, it was good besides that I don’t like so much onion. But besides that it was fantastic. I don’t remember the name of where I eat it…
I visited the white house too look around and it was bigger that I thaught but beutyfull!
There was some sort of texts around there where you could read about thingt in Whasington D.C, but you could also read about the White House ofc. So I learn some things about the withe house because I was intrested about that.
But as a fun activity I was at the ghosts walking. And when got there you are following a guide that shows you around and talking about intresting facts about the city. (The ghosts walking is at halloween).
To summarize my trip I would say that just the city was the thing I loved the most. Because it is just beutyfull especily when the sun it going down. And that is the thing why you should visit there because it is just beutyfull. And the food is really good ecsept that the half smoke tasted (for my opinion) to much onion, othervise it was fantastic. And this is you sign to book a trip to Whasington D.C! You are not going to regret it!
Bye!
Assistant: # Ellen Tenghagen
Assessment of Travel Blog Essay: Washington D.C
Grade Level: Gymnasiet (Upper secondary, Gy25)
Subject: English (personal descriptive writing)
Theme: Travel blog about Washington D.C
Length: Approx. 300 words
## Summary
This travel blog describes a trip to Washington D.C., focusing on the city’s beauty, cleanliness, local food (half-smoke), and a ghost walking tour around Halloween. The writer shares first impressions of the city and visits to landmarks such as the White House, including interesting texts and history surrounding it. The conclusion highlights the city’s charm and a recommendation to visit.
## Strengths and Weaknesses
| Strengths | Weaknesses |
|—————————————————————-|—————————————————————-|
| Personal and readable tone with simple, clear sentences | Many spelling mistakes (e.g., *Whashington*, *travle*, *beutyfull*) |
| Effective description of personal impressions and observations | Grammar and punctuation errors hinder clarity |
| Good effort to include sensory details (food taste) | Sentence structure often repetitive and awkward |
| Logical sequence covering introduction, main body, and conclusion | Some unclear or missing details |
| Inclusion of a cultural activity (ghost walking tour) | Repetition of words and phrases limits variety |
## Formative Feedback to the Writer
– Your personal voice makes the travel blog engaging; continue sharing your impressions in your own words.
– Focus on spelling common words and place names correctly to improve presentation and clarity.
– Work on grammar, especially verb forms, plural/singular agreement, and punctuation.
– Vary sentence structure to avoid short, repetitive sentences; try combining related ideas for better flow.
– Include more sensory details to make descriptions richer (e.g., smells, sounds, feelings).
– Try to provide more specific details about places and experiences to strengthen your story.
– Your conclusion clearly recommends visiting Washington D.C.; keep practicing clear, motivating endings.
– Proofreading your writing or using spelling tools can help reduce mistakes.
## Final Grade: E
You have completed the assignment with a good personal touch and clear descriptions of your experiences. However, frequent spelling and grammar errors reduce the clarity and quality of your text. Improving language mechanics and sentence variety will help you achieve a higher grade.
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User: Elsa Wihlborg 2025-10-17
Prov: Travel Blog HH25
Antal ord: 312
Skrivtid: 25 minuter
I choose to travel to this city because it seemd intresting and the city I visited London which is locaded in great brittain. My first impresssion when i arrived is that it was nice there and that I was welcomed by many people. They say it lives 8,945,310 people there.
I tryed fish and chips wich I thougt was very good and I also tried a pie witch was filled with some meat and it came with mushed potatoes aswell. I personaly thougt that it was good and could try it again. It was many more dishes i would like to try but i didn’t get the chance to try.
I visited the harry potter museum witch was very fun but the tickets was almost out of stock everytime I checked. It was pricey but worth it because it was sutch a cool exerience and was very much like in the movie. I personaly think it’s worth it one time but not again because of the price of the tickets. I also visited London eye which is very popular and it was a long line to get to ride it, you also need to book tickets for it but the price was better and would really recomend it too everybody that want to visit London because it was such a cool experience. The ride was about 30 minutes and was open monday- friday from 11:am – 6:pm and saturday – sunday 10:am – 8:30 pm. But I recomed coming a bit earlier because of the lines.
I loved trying new food and that i got to experience some fun activitys in London.
I think you should visit London because you can do so much there and the food is amazing. So I think you should try visiting London to see how fun and nice It is to be there.
Assistant: # Elsa Wihlborg
Assessment of Travel Blog Essay: London
Grade Level: Gymnasiet (Upper secondary, Gy25)
Subject: English (personal descriptive writing)
Theme: Travel blog about London
Length: Approx. 312 words
## Summary
This travel blog shares a visit to London, highlighting first impressions, local food such as fish and chips and a meat pie, and visits to popular tourist attractions including the Harry Potter museum and the London Eye. The writer describes their enjoyment of the activities and food and encourages readers to visit London for its variety of experiences.
## Strengths and Weaknesses
| Strengths | Weaknesses |
|————————————————————–|—————————————————————-|
| Personal voice with straightforward descriptions | Repeated spelling mistakes (e.g., *locaded*, *mushed*, *recomed*) |
| Clear sequence of experiences and activities | Frequent grammar errors disrupt clarity |
| Good inclusion of practical information (opening hours, recommendation to come early) | Some awkward phrasing and informal expressions |
| Effective expression of personal opinions and recommendations | Sentence structure often simplistic and repetitive |
## Formative Feedback to the Writer
– Your clear, personal descriptions help readers understand your experience; keep sharing your own opinions.
– Pay attention to spelling and grammar, especially regular past tense forms and plural/singular agreement.
– Vary sentence length and structure to create a smoother reading experience.
– Use more descriptive vocabulary to enhance your writing and avoid repeating simple phrases.
– Check punctuation to improve sentence clarity, especially commas and apostrophes.
– Adding more sensory details (how food tastes, what you felt) can make your blog more vivid.
– Keep including useful practical details and recommendations, as these add value for readers.
– Review your writing before submitting to catch small mistakes and improve flow.
## Final Grade: D
Your travel blog shows good effort in describing experiences and giving recommendations. Airmarked grammatical and spelling weaknesses make some parts hard to follow. Improving language accuracy and style will support a higher grade in future assignments.
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User: Emma Holmström 2025-10-17
Prov: Travel Blog HH25
Antal ord: 532
Skrivtid: 30 minuter
I chose to travel to Houston because there’s so many fun activities.
Houston is located in Texas, USA.
When i first arrived i was a bit nervous but also thrilled, it was very hot there and very much tourists. The airport staff were really nice and welcoming, they helped me find the hotel i booked.
The first night when i arrived i tried their local dish, Cajun Crawfish, it’s like a seafood boil, it was really good and tasty and it smelled amazing, it was alot of seasoning and the butter sauce that you got on the side had so much flavor in it. It was a sauce made of butter, cajun seasoning, salt and pepper, paprika powder, and some chili. I have never eaten anything that good before. Then i went back to the hotel where the staff welcomed me and gave me some tips on where to go and some museums to visit.
The next day i went to the Space Center, it’s a science museum where you can learn about NASA and look at airplanes and rockets. It was a huge museum and ALOT of tourists that were also following a tourguide. I had a tourguide that showed me all the interesting facts about NASA and even went inside a airplane and a rocket that had been up in space before. It was so exciting to find out about space and how things work. I was there for about 3 hours then i went on a walk troughout the city where i saw so much country clubs and the city was just so beautiful.
In the next morning i went to Houston Zoo, they have over 6000 animals. They had lions, leopards, giraffes, bears, buffalos and more. I had a private tourguide so i could come along when they fed the animals and get a closer look and learn about each and every animal, my tourguide let me feed the lion through the cage with a spatula and all i can say is, WOW lions have huuuge teeth but really they are just big and dangerous cats. I learned that if you ever get chased by a lion you should never run, you should stand still and keep eye contact or ove very slowly, NEVER climb up in a tree cause they will follow you. Then after that we went to the buffalos and oh wow they smell awful, but they are huge and very sweet. I was there for almost six hours!? It was so fun and time just flies by.
I really loved everything about Houston but especially the food, i think everyone should try it atleast one time in their life. The Space Center was exciting and you really learn alot when you visit. The nature and the heat was perfect i would wanna stay there forever.
Everyone should visit Houston atleast once, i promise you wont regret it. Houston really has everything, they have alot of museums, they have the zoo, they have so much different resturaunts, they have country clubs you can visit if your old enough and you can learn all about western horse riding, so i really think everyone would enjoy visiting.
Assistant: # Emma Holmström
Assessment of Travel Blog Essay: Houston
Grade Level: Gymnasiet (Upper secondary, Gy25)
Subject: English (personal descriptive writing)
Theme: Travel blog about Houston
Length: Approx. 532 words
## Summary
This travel blog describes a visit to Houston, Texas, focusing on local cuisine, visits to the Space Center and Houston Zoo, as well as exploring the city. The writer shares sensory details about food, animal encounters, and museum experiences. The blog emphasizes the diversity of activities, food, and attractions Houston offers and encourages readers to visit.
## Strengths and Weaknesses
| Strengths | Weaknesses |
|—————————————————————–|—————————————————————–|
| Strong and engaging personal voice with vivid sensory details | Numerous spelling errors (e.g., *alot*, *resturaunts*, *wanna*) |
| Rich description of food, animals, and museum visits | Grammar and punctuation mistakes affecting clarity |
| Detailed recounting of activities with enthusiasm | Some awkward phrasing and informal expressions |
| Logical structure with clear introduction, body, and conclusion | Sentence length and variety could be improved |
## Formative Feedback to the Writer
– Your detailed descriptions and enthusiasm keep the reader engaged; continue using sensory details like taste, smell, and sight.
– Check spelling and use of contractions; avoid informal expressions like *wanna* in formal writing.
– Work on sentence variety by mixing short and longer sentences to improve flow.
– Review punctuation, particularly commas and capitalization, for clearer meaning.
– Try to replace repeated simple expressions (e.g., *so fun*) with synonyms or more specific adjectives.
– Keep including facts and interesting information, such as NASA details and animal behavior; this enriches your writing.
– Use paragraphs consistently to separate different ideas and experiences better.
– Your conclusion motivates readers effectively; keep practicing strong endings.
## Final Grade: C
Your blog conveys a lively and personal travel experience with effective sensory details. Frequent language errors and occasional informal style limit the clarity and polish of your writing. Continued focus on accuracy and style will help you improve further.
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User: Fanny Bohman 2025-10-17
Prov: Travel Blog HH25
Antal ord: 730
Skrivtid: 59 minuter
Glasgow
I chose to travel to Glasgow because I have relatives that have been there before and they’ve said that Glasgow is a great and beautiful city to visit. Glasgow is located by both bank of the River Clyde in west cenral Scotland. Glasgow is the largest city in Scotland and there are a lot of places to visit.
When I first arrived and walked into the city, I was shocked, I couldn’t find any words for what I was seeing. It was really beautiful and my first thought was “What a city!”. The buildings there were old but also modern looking at the same time. The view over the city was something else, something I’ve never seen before. And the air was just so refreshing. The surrounding felt like home, that’s how good I felt.
After some admiring, looking around and checking in on my hotel that I was staying in over the night, I went to get some food because I was starving after the long flight to get there. I went to a very expensive looking restaurant in the middle of Glasgow. When I walked through the door into the restaurnt, I was met by a intensive smell of delicious food. I sat down at an empty table right by a window and one of the waiters gave me an menu to look at. “Haggis”, “Neeps and tatties”, and so much more food to choose from. Since Haggis in Scotland’s national dish, I wanted to try that. Haggis is sheep liver, lungs and heart with minced oatmeal, herbs and spice. I was a little sceptical to try it but I ordered it anyways. I waited a few minutes before I got my food. When I took my first bite out of that Haggis, let me tell you I did not know how to react. It wasn’t bad but it had such a weird taste. It tasted better and better the more I ate of it but i wouldn’t personally choose it again.
After I was done eating I decided to go to a museum called “The burrell Collection”. In this museum you can look at over 9000 medieval, islamic, chinese, eygyptan and french pieces of art that carry a history from over 6000 years ago. The museum was filled with old stuff and I must say it was really interesting to look at and read about these objects. I learned a lot of new things about different cultures by going there.
When I got back to my hotel after a long day, I decided to look up what I could do the next day. I decided that I was going to go on a walking tour around the city, mostly for fun but I thought it could be interesting to learn more about Glasgow while I was there. I got up early in the morning so I could go on one of the earlier tours. The tour was offered by invisible cities and the tour guides were experienced and people affected by the homlessness. They showed us around in Glasgow and talked about Glasgow’s history, people and landmarks. There was so much to look at all the time and at the same time I tried my best to listen to what the tour guide was saying. The walking tour was a great experience and I would defenitly recommend it to everyone going on a trip to Glasgow. The same day, I also tried one of Glasgow’s other famous dishes “Neeps and Tatties”. The taste was actually very good and I could definitly eat it again. I would choose Neeps and Tatties over Haggis but I think you should try both dishes so you can “get a taste of Glasgow”.
Even tho the trip didn’t last so long, I feel like I learned a lot, and it was interesting stuff to. My favorite part was definitly visiting The Burrell Collection. I love learning about cultures and history so that one is hard to beat, even though the Neeps and Tatties almost did, it was so good and flavorful.
I think others should visit Glasgow to get the same expierience that I did with the view, the learning and honestly everything. No matter who you are, how old you are or what you like (history, nature, food, adventures…), you should visit Glasgow because there is something for litereally everyone.
Assistant: # Fanny Bohman
Assessment of Travel Blog Essay: Glasgow
Grade Level: Gymnasiet (Upper secondary, Gy25)
Subject: English (personal descriptive writing)
Theme: Travel blog about Glasgow
Length: Approx. 730 words
## Summary
This travel blog describes a visit to Glasgow, Scotland, beginning with the stunning cityscape and the writer’s positive feelings of familiarity. It highlights tasting local dishes like haggis and neeps and tatties, with detailed reflections on taste and preference. The blog covers visits to The Burrell Collection museum and a walking tour focused on the city’s history and social issues. The writer concludes with personal reflections on learning and recommendations for potential visitors.
## Strengths and Weaknesses
| Strengths | Weaknesses |
|————————————————————–|—————————————————————-|
| Engaging personal voice with expressive descriptions | Several spelling and typing mistakes (e.g., *intensive*, *defenitly*, *expierience*) |
| Rich sensory and cultural details, especially about food and museums | Occasional grammar and sentence structure issues affecting flow |
| Clear text structure with good paragraphing | Minor awkward phrasing and repetitiveness |
| Shows good integration of historical and cultural content | Some punctuation and capitalization errors |
## Formative Feedback to the Writer
– Your enthusiasm and detailed descriptions create a vivid travel experience; continue to bring places and tastes to life with sensory language.
– Review spelling and typing errors carefully to raise the overall quality of your writing.
– Work on sentence variety and combining shorter sentences for smoother flow and readability.
– Pay attention to grammar points such as article use, plural forms, and prepositions.
– Avoid repeating simple phrases; use synonyms or restructure sentences to increase variety.
– Keep including cultural and historical facts as they enrich your blog and engage the reader.
– Check punctuation to clarify meaning and mark sentence boundaries clearly.
– Your conclusion is motivating and inclusive; keep encouraging different readers to explore varied experiences.
## Final Grade: C
Your travel blog has good depth and personal engagement with the city of Glasgow. Some frequent language mistakes slightly reduce clarity and polish. With focused work on language mechanics and sentence flow, your writing will improve and achieve higher grades.
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User: Lilly Nilsson 2025-10-17
Prov: Travel Blog HH25
Antal ord: 241
Skrivtid: 32 minuter
Hi, my name is Lilly, and i wanted to text about how it is in melbourn. Well i chosed to visit melbourne because people have told me how beutifull the place is and especially all fun things you can do there but also all the good food you can eat. So spontaneous as i am i decided to travel to Melbourn. Melbourne is a city in Australia and i know that Austraila can be very hot but geez, it was extremly hot, and as a person from Sweden i always have warm clothes with me werever i travel because you never know. I can tell you that that’s not needed in Australia/Melbourne. During my three days in Melbourne i visited flinders treet station (witch is a landmark and a cultural tuchstone of Melbourne), ate blueberry and ricotta hotcake from top padock (delicious, you need to try it), and last but not least i enjoyed the Albert Park Lake witch is a very peacefull place in the city were you can swim, walk, feel the water on your skin, and just enjoy your life. The best thing about this trip was umm… it’s actually hard to chose but i would say that the calm and peacefull community was the best thing. If you are stuck in hard work day in and day out just like i were, i think you really would need a trip to Melbourne. See ya in Melbourne:)!
Assistant: # Lilly Nilsson
Assessment of Travel Blog Essay: Melbourne
Grade Level: Gymnasiet (Upper secondary, Gy25)
Subject: English (personal descriptive writing)
Theme: Travel blog about Melbourne
Length: Approx. 241 words
## Summary
This travel blog narrates a short trip to Melbourne, Australia, highlighting the city’s beauty, enjoyable food, and relaxing atmosphere. The writer mentions visiting Flinders Street Station, tasting a local hotcake, and spending peaceful moments at Albert Park Lake. The blog concludes by emphasizing Melbourne as a soothing escape from daily stress.
## Strengths and Weaknesses
| Strengths | Weaknesses |
|————————————————————–|—————————————————————|
| Personal and clear voice with friendly tone | Frequent spelling errors (e.g., *chosed*, *beutifull*, *peacefull*) |
| Effective sensory descriptions of places and food | Grammar and punctuation errors affect readability |
| Good structure with brief introduction, body, and conclusion | Some awkward phrasing and occasional informal language |
| Inclusion of feelings and recommendations | Sentence variety could be improved |
## Formative Feedback to the Writer
– Your friendly and personal style invites readers to share your experience; keep this tone.
– Work on spelling common words and place names carefully to improve text quality.
– Pay attention to punctuation, especially commas and capitalization, to clarify meaning.
– Vary sentence lengths to make your writing more engaging and less repetitive.
– Include more sensory details about what you saw, felt, and tasted to enrich descriptions.
– Check verb tenses and subject-verb agreement for grammatical consistency.
– Practice combining simple sentences to improve flow and readability.
– Your conclusion effectively encourages readers to consider Melbourne as a calming destination.
## Final Grade: E
Your blog successfully completes the assignment with a clear personal voice and relevant content. Spelling and grammar mistakes reduce clarity and polish. Improving language accuracy and sentence variety will raise your grade in future texts.
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User: Lisa Persson 2025-10-17
Prov: Travel Blog HH25
Antal ord: 377
Skrivtid: 33 minuter
Hello people!
So I’ll tell you about my trip to Edinburgh. Now to start you off I’m going to tell you just why I wanted to go to just Edinburgh. The city is known for its old buildings and a feeling of almost living in the past giving the city the nickname “Old Smokey”. Now did I go there for the cute nick name? Maybe…but there is also a better reason.
It has been decates since Edinburgh was at war, it’s a peaceful city with little to no criminal activity, which is also a reason to its other nickname “The Athens of the North”. Old Smokey is located Southeast of Scotland, and when I first came there i was shooked at how beautiful everything was. Now I’m talking old stone buildings big churches and the lighting, by every street there was a streetlamp, now not one of these new streetlaps we see in Sweden but think 1800 streetlamp that had to light automaticly, and small shops and cafés it was just beautiful.
Day two there I went to the national museum of scotland, did you know it was founded in 1780? It’s an old building with a long and interesting history. I leart so much about the history of Scotland and Edinburgh, about Nessi the loch ness monster and got to see the so called “real” pictures of Nessi. It was accually quite interesting. I got to try some Millionare’s shortbread, which is a sweet soft cookie with chockolate. It was probably the best thing I’ve ever tried. Although it was a bit expensive I had a good time.
The last day there I went to Edinburgh Castle, it was a warm day so me and a friend I made there walked the Royal Mile to get to the catsle. We stopped and ate lunch at a cute little place and I tried Partan Bree for the first time. It’s a crab soup served with a click of cream it was honestly so good.
Walking the Royal Mile and getting a guided tour of the Edinburgh castle was definitly the best part of the trip.
But that is all I did when I spended my days in Edinburgh, stay tuned if I go to anymore places.
Assistant: # Lisa Persson
Assessment of Travel Blog Essay: Edinburgh
Grade Level: Gymnasiet (Upper secondary, Gy25)
Subject: English (personal descriptive writing)
Theme: Travel blog about Edinburgh
Length: Approx. 377 words
## Summary
This travel blog describes a visit to Edinburgh, Scotland, highlighting the city’s historical charm and peaceful atmosphere. The writer shares impressions of old buildings, streetlamps, and shops. Experiences include visits to the National Museum of Scotland, tasting Millionaire’s shortbread, and exploring Edinburgh Castle with friends. The blog conveys curiosity and enjoyment of local culture and food.
## Strengths and Weaknesses
| Strengths | Weaknesses |
|—————————————————————-|—————————————————————-|
| Engaging and lively personal voice | Several spelling mistakes (e.g., *decates*, *shooked*, *catsle*) |
| Good inclusion of historical and cultural information | Grammar and punctuation errors sometimes reduce clarity |
| Detailed descriptions of places and local foods | Sentence structure occasionally repetitive and informal |
| Logical sequence with clear paragraphs | Minor awkward phrasing and capitalization errors |
## Formative Feedback to the Writer
– Your enthusiastic and personal style draws readers into your experience; keep sharing your feelings and observations.
– Review spelling to avoid common mistakes, particularly with frequently used words and place names.
– Work on grammar and punctuation to enhance clarity and professional tone.
– Vary sentence lengths and structures to improve flow and avoid repetitiveness.
– Include more sensory details to vividly describe tastes, sights, and sounds of your visits.
– Be mindful of informal language and phrasing that may impact the text’s polish.
– Continue providing interesting facts and personal reactions as they enrich your blog.
– Your conclusion suggests more adventures to come, creating engagement for readers.
## Final Grade: C
Your travel blog is engaging with solid content and cultural details. Spelling, grammar, and sentence variety need improvement for greater clarity and polish. With focused language work, you will raise your writing to a higher level.
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User: Luke Andersson 2025-10-17
Prov: Travel Blog HH25
Antal ord: 769
Skrivtid: 59 minuter
Chicago
Hello, I visited Chicago during this past winter. I chose to go to Chicago beacuse of the fact that I think it looks very pretty during the winter time with all of the snow. Chicago is located in the United states of America, Northeastern Illinois and there are 2,716,450 residents in Chicago. My first impression when I arrived was wow it’s so so pretty here in the winter with all of the snow. I looked out of the window in the airport and just saw a lot of snow, and you could see how cold it was. I also notices directly when I got out of the airport that there was alot of car noise from all of the diffrent directions, and that it was snowing a bit. I also realised when I got out of the airport that it was colder than I had thought.
I tried alot of diffrent cuisine when I were in Chicago, three of the ones I tried was the Italian beef sandwitch, deep dish pizza and Chicago-style hot dogs. They’re were all very tasty, my favorite were probably the deep dish pizza it had alot of cheese and tomato saouse witch had a tangy taste and it also had a thick crust witch was extremly delicous, it smelled out of this world honestly and it tasted even better. I got it at a local resturant that someone had recomended on the internet. The Italian beef sandwich were also very good and I got it at a food cart that sold some of the dishes that is from Chicago or is conected to Chicago in some way.
I went to the Clarence F. buckingham memorial fountain too and it was extremly pretty. I decided that I would read up on the fountan and it’s history and I learned that it’s a memorial for Clarence F. buckingham and it was donated by his sister Kate S. buckingham when Clarence had died.
I also went to the art insitute of Chicago and I saw alot of diffrent paintings and diffrent art collections from all across the world. The art was very abstract if you can call it that but very intresting trying to understand someone from how they paint a painting.
Then lastly I went on a Ghosts and Gangsters tour to learn about Chicagos dark past with gangsters and how the city was built from the beginning. It were extremly intresting honestly and get to learn about how Chicago started was very very intressting. It was very nerve wrecking to on the tour since they were talking about some pretty dark topics but if you just try to tune it out so should you not get very affected from it.
I learned from talking with diffrent people on the street that Robert Francis Prevost (Pope Leo XIV) is from Chicago and so is the actor Harrison Ford who is in the Marvel project: Captain America brave new world, witch came out earlier this year (2025). Pope Leo XIV is the 267th pope of the Chatholic church is witch is also one of the things that I learned.
The thing I loved the most about my trip to Chicago was probably the snow and how it smelled like the cold winter time. It also smelled like any other city, like gas and cars. It was also filled with cars and people everywhere. But since I went there during the winter there werent as much people like it is during the summer someone told me. He also told me that I propably chose the best time of year to visit since there werent as much people as it is during the summer time.
I really loved the fact that people were willing to help when you had questions about diffrent things and I also love the fact that people talked alot and didint judge when you said somthing wrong. I loved the people the local cuisine and that it had snowed just before I had got there and it snowed when the plane was landing. One thing I can say is that if you go to Chiacgo during winter time so should you take enough warm jackets with you, so you don’t frease your ass of in the cold. But I heard that it can get really hot during the summer time so if you go during the summer then you should bring chlotes like shorts and t-shirts.
You should go to Chicago during the winter so you can see how pretty it is, and you should try all of the diffrent local cuisines.
Assistant: # Luke Andersson
Assessment of Travel Blog Essay: Chicago
Grade Level: Gymnasiet (Upper secondary, Gy25)
Subject: English (personal descriptive writing)
Theme: Travel blog about Chicago
Length: Approx. 769 words
## Summary
This travel blog details a winter visit to Chicago, emphasizing the beauty of snow-covered scenes and bustling city life. The writer describes trying various local foods including deep dish pizza, Italian beef sandwiches, and Chicago-style hot dogs. Visits to notable landmarks such as the Clarence F. Buckingham Memorial Fountain, the Art Institute of Chicago, and a Ghosts and Gangsters tour provide cultural and historical insights. The blog concludes with reflections on the city’s atmosphere, friendly locals, and practical travel advice.
## Strengths and Weaknesses
| Strengths | Weaknesses |
|—————————————————————–|—————————————————————–|
| Detailed and vivid descriptions of food, weather, and city life | Numerous spelling mistakes (e.g., *diffrent*, *sandwitch*, *frease*) |
| Comprehensive coverage of key landmarks and activities | Grammar errors affecting sentence clarity and formal tone |
| Rich personal reflections and practical tips for travelers | Some awkward phrasing, repetition, and unpolished sentence flow |
| Good structure with introduction, detailed body, and conclusion | Occasional punctuation oversights and capitalization errors |
## Formative Feedback to the Writer
– Your descriptive writing paints a strong picture of Chicago’s winter and local culture; keep using sensory details to engage readers.
– Work on spelling common words carefully to improve professionalism and clarity.
– Pay attention to grammar, especially subject-verb agreement, articles, and prepositions for smoother, more formal writing.
– Vary sentence structure and length to improve flow and avoid repetitive phrasing.
– Proofread for punctuation and capitalization to increase readability.
– Continue including facts about landmarks and people, as these enrich your writing.
– Avoid overly informal expressions to raise the formal level appropriate for the assignment.
– Your practical travel advice provides added value for readers; keep including such useful tips.
## Final Grade: C
Your blog demonstrates clear effort in providing detailed experiences and reflections with engaging descriptions. Persistent language errors and some structural issues limit clarity and polish. With practice in language accuracy and style, you can improve to higher levels.
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User: Mollie Kaunitz 2025-10-17
Prov: Travel Blog HH25
Antal ord: 281
Skrivtid: 25 minuter
Singapore
I chose to travel to Singapore becus it is a verry beauty place and city and it is a verry good city a presenttation about,becuse you leran verry mutch about this city. Singapore locade verry clost with Maylasia with the sea. My firesrt inpressions with Singapore was how big the the city was and how mutch somthing you can do there.
The food in Singapore is mutch rice,chicken and nuddels. The popular food is Bak kut the it a pork on tea i have not taste this food becus I will for this se good out. A atoher food some is popular is chicken with rice and suces there is veery good and I have tasted. In Singapore is Marina Bay sands a popular landmark in the city, you can eat on 2 class resturants and live in five star hotel and all things is open 24/7. I think this place see verry good out becus you can doing verry mutch things and things with mutch good (resentioner). I learn a this place is a popoular place in Singapore and you can doing verry mutch there. The fun activity you can doing in Singapore is “Singapore flyger” there is a verry verry big “rollercoster” you can sit in and a see over the city,the flyger is verry haigh and you can drink some champange in the rollecoster.
There i love whit my trip is how big the city is and how mutch things you can doing in the city. I think others should to trip to Singapore there is a city you not for missing. So i think you can book a trip to Singapore NOOW!!!!!!.
Assistant: # Mollie Kaunitz
Assessment of Travel Blog Essay: Singapore
Grade Level: Gymnasiet (Upper secondary, Gy25)
Subject: English (personal descriptive writing)
Theme: Travel blog about Singapore
Length: Approx. 281 words
## Summary
This travel blog presents a short description of Singapore, focusing on the city’s size, popular food dishes, and attractions such as Marina Bay Sands and the “Singapore Flyer”. The writer emphasizes the variety of activities available and expresses enthusiasm about the city’s offerings, concluding with a strong recommendation to visit.
## Strengths and Weaknesses
| Strengths | Weaknesses |
|———————————————————-|——————————————————————|
| Clear enthusiasm and positive personal tone | Many spelling mistakes and inaccurate word forms |
| Attempts to describe food and landmarks | Frequent grammar mistakes affecting clarity |
| Good effort to include sensory and experiential details | Sentence structure is often repetitive and unclear |
| Strong motivation to encourage others to visit | Inconsistent punctuation, capitalization, and vocabulary choice |
## Formative Feedback to the Writer
– Your enthusiasm shines through in your writing; keep expressing your excitement, but focus on clarity.
– Work on spelling common words accurately and practice English grammar rules, especially verb forms.
– Pay attention to sentence structure to avoid repetition and improve understandability.
– Include more sensory details (taste, sight, feelings) clearly to enrich your descriptions.
– Review punctuation rules, especially for capitalization, commas, and sentence endings.
– Try to use simpler sentences that are grammatically correct, rather than longer unclear ones.
– Reading your text aloud can help catch errors and improve fluency.
– Continue motivating readers with clear, strong conclusions.
## Final Grade: E
You have communicated enthusiasm and relevant content, but language accuracy and sentence clarity need considerable improvement. With focus on spelling, grammar, and sentence structure, you can reach higher levels in your writing.
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User: Molly Elvstrand 2025-10-17
Prov: Travel Blog HH25
Antal ord: 558
Skrivtid: 50 minuter
I went to Los Angeles in California, USA. I went there cause i thought that it is a big city and is a lot to look at and places to be at and do fun stuffs. Los Angeles is a big city and there lives about 3,9 million people so there is a lot of pepole and traffic so when you get there you have to look out for people cause they are every where. There is also a lot of famous people in Los Angeles. Some of them are Gigi hadid and shes been modeling since she was 2 years old and she is still a model. There is Leonardo DiCaprio. He is an actor and has been in alot of movies like taitanic and Romeo and Julia.
When i was in Los Angeles i tried some diffrent type of foods. As they are close to Mexico they have alot of insparation from the mexican kitchen and have been geeting alot of street foods from there. As like street tacos, that have a lot of flavors in it. It tasted good and i ate it 2 times when i was there. I also saw hot dogs and here they have chill on them witch i think is a bit weird and i didnt try them. There is a really good dessert thet i treid at a resturant. That is an icecream sandwitch, is just two cookies and icecream in the middle but it was really good.
In the day i got to wisit the Madame tussads Hollywood museum. And that is where they have made famous people in to wax and they have alot of celeberties that they have made into wax figures. You can go around and look at them or you can take fothos with them. I think that it was cool how they made them into wax figures and have spend alot of time of them.
I was also at The Natrual history museum. Its where you can look at old fossils and skeletons. And they have a bit of the museum that is inspired by the ice age. There was a bit less people in there so if you want some place that is a bit more calmer i would go there.
Me and some other people went to the Hollywood sign to look at it. Its located on the Mount Lee and you have to hike to get there. It was a long walk and alot of walking. But if you like that then i would recomend going there cause its a beautiful view when you get up to the top. You cant toutch the sign and there is police there so you cant be like near it.
I really liked Los Angeles and it was fun to be there and i would travel there again. Its a big city so there is so mutch that you can do and if you just want go around the city and do like some shopping you can do that of if you want to do some fun activites you can visit a lot of diffrent kinds of places. There is some to do wtih the whole family or if you want to explore you can also do that.
I think that you should visit it cause there is somethink for everyone to do.
Assistant: # Molly Elvstrand
Assessment of Travel Blog Essay: Los Angeles
Grade Level: Gymnasiet (Upper secondary, Gy25)
Subject: English (personal descriptive writing)
Theme: Travel blog about Los Angeles
Length: Approx. 558 words
## Summary
This travel blog shares a visit to Los Angeles, California, emphasizing the city’s size, diversity, and attractions. The writer describes local food inspired by Mexican cuisine, visits to Madame Tussauds Hollywood museum, the Natural History Museum, and a hike to the Hollywood Sign. The blog reflects enthusiasm for the city’s variety of activities and encourages others to visit for many different experiences.
## Strengths and Weaknesses
| Strengths | Weaknesses |
|—————————————————————-|—————————————————————–|
| Engaging and personal tone with varied experiences | Frequent spelling and grammar mistakes |
| Descriptive details about food, museums, and outdoor activities | Awkward phrasing and some repetitive sentence structures |
| Good coverage of cultural landmarks and personal opinions | Punctuation and capitalization errors |
| Logical organization with clear introduction, body, and conclusion | Some unclear word choices and informal tone |
## Formative Feedback to the Writer
– Your enthusiastic descriptions help convey an engaging travel experience; keep sharing what you observe and enjoy.
– Review spelling and grammar carefully to improve clarity and professionalism.
– Work on varying sentence structure and combining ideas to improve flow and reduce repetition.
– Pay attention to punctuation and capitalization, especially at the beginning of sentences and for proper nouns.
– Use simpler vocabulary when unsure and avoid informal expressions for a more polished style.
– Include more sensory details to enrich your descriptions of food, places, and activities.
– Continue giving practical advice and personal recommendations as these add value.
– Proofread your text or get feedback to catch and correct errors before submitting.
## Final Grade: D
Your blog provides a clear and enthusiastic personal description of your visit. However, frequent language errors and structural weaknesses affect clarity and polish. Continued focus on language accuracy and style will help raise your grade.
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